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This week’s discussion requires 2 responses to classmates to earn full credit.

In your feedback address these concerns:

  • What, in your words, is the peer’s paragraph about?
  • Are there any sentences or ideas that fall outside the main topic? If so, which ones?
  • How are quotes or paraphrases used to support your peer’s ideas? Would your peer’s audience find these to be convincing, or is more evidence needed?
  • What writing strategies does your peer use to appeal to their audience?
  • Are there any ways in which the writer could engage the reader more?
  • How does your peer lead the reader from one idea to the next? Did you get a little lost anywhere? If so, where did you get lost?
  • What might help your peer overcome the challenges they faced?
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